http://joesephpottersblog.blogspot.co.uk/ - Edgar's character blog
1. What do you think is the strongest part of the blog? This could be a certain post, the writing style, the graphic design, the use of alternative media, the images, etc. What makes this element so strong?
I think that the best part of Edgar's characters blog is the use of appropriate images . this includes the background and a picture linked to a piece of text he has written
2. Is there a part of the blog you find confusing? A part that doesn’t seem to quite match the rest or the character for which it was designed? A link for which you don’t understand the connection? Can you give some suggestions for how to improve that part?
there is a lot of missing information so it is harder to understand the bits of text there are, the way to improve this would be to write more posts and also relate back to the script more. He doesn't explain the characters from josephs view point or at all which would be very helpful
3. After reading the blog, what would you like to know more about? Is there a post that leaves you with questions? Write down at least two questions to help your partner further develop this blog.
the first post that Edgar posted starts with 'After the argument I had with Alex and Simon ' he doesn't explain what the argument is about though, if someone who didn't know the script or story line read he's blog it wouldn't make sense so he should expand on this
4. Did you notice any major misspellings or grammatical issues? Please note down anything.
I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes or misspellings in Edgars blog .
5. Did your partner fulfil all the requirements on the Character Blog Requirements hand out? If not, which one or ones still need to be added?
Edgar has completed two posts and has put an image linked to the text
Edgar still needs to add to his blog two more posts one of which needs to be at least 200 words
Meaningful quotations related to your character
A photo of your character (as you imagine him or her) with a brief description of them (role in life, relationships, goals, location, etc.)
A photo of you in your costume.
A link to a video or an embedded video
An addition set of research links grouped around a theme
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